S = PLS!!!!

okay so there have been some MAJOR changes to our on-som-bleh.( said in over the top frech accent).

we have scrapped the whole spy idea. and cut the ned kelly and the america’s cup
scenes and the old intro and the old ending.

when have new characters. well i dont really cause im still the old coot but now im a grandad. jess is now a loving father (to the son mainly) and a dissapointment to his fatehr (me), flick is the grandaughter ( and grandpas fav), nadia is the mother (who seems to be having maratal problems wiht her husband) and jacqui is the grandson who is the pride and joy of his father.

okay the story is the family has come to visit gramps. and here we have a little intro.

and then gramps tells the story about the war and the giant walkie talkies and the morse code (i have to tell that quicker) so we kept that scene.

then we go inot a scene about the changing technology of music. its got a gramma phone, boom box, disc men or walk men and an i pod.

then were gogin to go inot the footy scene. we like the idea of having the footy so we kept it but now it doesnt have about how the spies rigged it. now its more like all the new camreas and slo mo replay technology.

and the we have a “what will they think of next?!” moment and we go to future technology.

and then we end it some how….

TA -DAH!!!!!!!!!

“brain, top marks for not trying….see you later elevator..”

~Laura~